demon hunting

1636 a ship of demon hunters are sent to a invisible island in the bay of iron all so none as the bay of blood

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tmiller

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I must admit... your grammer is horrid.

I do not want to sound mean, but I won't join this just because of that fact. HOWEVER, I would suggest you freshen up on English, and try it again. Because if you don't get any people wanting to join, it's because of that.

Please remember this is only to help, I'm not trying to be mean.

FamishedPants

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FamishedPants why you so nube?! Haven't you ever bee to the south or anywhere in the Caribbean before? Everyone speaks poorly and by the way the English in America isn't true English because of multiple reasons, same in Britain. But a good role player doesn't need to have very clean language to role play because there will be characters who speak that way. I know some people who'd like to join.

Roku Mushabuki

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I agree with FamishedPants. I feel like you have a great idea here, but it looks sloppy. Freshen it up. Brush off the dust. Make it sleek and smooth to read - that's what people look for in a roleplay, am I not correct? A roleplayer does need to have clean language. I mean sure, I could write with horrible grammar and a lack of capitalization/punctuation, but who is going to respect me as a writer if I show myself to be sloppy? Characters may speak that way, but that doesn't mean that all writing should look like that.

I do hope that your roleplay kicks off, though. It seems like a good idea.

tallyrebel

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Roku Mushabuki wrote:FamishedPants why you so nube?! Haven't you ever bee to the south or anywhere in the Caribbean before? Everyone speaks poorly and by the way the English in America isn't true English because of multiple reasons, same in Britain. But a good role player doesn't need to have very clean language to role play because there will be characters who speak that way. I know some people who'd like to join.

Here... I'm just stating that he or she needs to work on at least the basics of English.... Now, just to make you more concious of your errors:

"FamishedPants, why are you so noob? Haven't you ever been south or anywhere in the Carribbean before? Everyone there speaks poorly and by the way; English in America isn't true English because of multiple reasons, same goes for Britain. But, a good role player doesn't need to have clean language to role play because there will be characters that speak that way. I know some people who'd like to join."-My corrections to your post. I must admit, I'm not too good with the semicolon, but I believe I used them properly.

Anyways, I'm not sure what I was trying to achieve by that..... Oh, yeah! You want to have good, aesthetic writing skills so that people will be more inclined to join your RP!

1636 a ship of demon hunters are sent to a invisible island in the bay of iron all so none as the bay of blood

Here is my correction:

"1636, a ship of demon hunters are sent to an invisible island in the Bay of Iron, also known as the 'Bay of Blood'."

Notice that you said, "All so none as-" That is horribly incorrect and is a reason why I can't be bothered to join.

Please remember that I am just pointing out mistakes in hope that you'll listen and improve!

FamishedPants

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